Guest Post by Laurie Wallmark
Whether
your students are writing fiction or nonfiction, there might be an unfamiliar
word, concept, or fact that needs additional explanation. This might be
anything from a STEM (science, technology, engineering, and math) fact to a
sports move, a fantasy world setting to an alien language. Here’s a writing
exercise to help your students think about the many techniques available in
their writer’s toolbox that will help.
First,
as a group exercise, have your students imagine they’re writing a story about a
little boy with asthma. Explain that not everyone knows about this disease. Ask for suggestions of how this could be explained in
the story.
Here
are some possible techniques:
·
Simplify
the definition – it’s a disease where you have trouble breathing
·
Give
an analogy – it’s like trying to breath through a straw
·
Show
an action – describe a character having an asthma attack
·
Offer
an example – character can mention famous people who have asthma
·
Show
in the narrative – the text explains what asthma is
·
Use
a question & answer – have another character asks about the disease
As an example, you can read my book Ada Byron Lovelace
and the Thinking Machine and point out how even difficult concepts can be
explained using appropriate text techniques. Ada Byron Lovelace was the world’s
first computer programmer. In order to appreciate her groundbreaking
achievement, the reader needs to understand the concept of an algorithm. Some
of the techniques I used to explain this were:
·
Give
a definition – “A set of steps that are followed in order to solve a
mathematical problem or to complete a computer process.”
·
Simplify
the definition – “Ada decided to create an algorithm, a set of mathematical
instructions.”
·
Show
an action – “Ada broke the problem into a series of simple steps.”
·
Use
an example – “The machine could follow these instructions and solve a complex
math problem, one difficult to figure out by hand.”
Now
it’s time for the students to do a writing exercise on their own. Have them
think of an unfamiliar word, concept, or fact they might need to explain in a
story. If they’re having trouble coming up with anything, you can give suggestions
such as: cultural or religious traditions, sports terms, or hobby activities.
Challenge them to write five or more ways to give an explanation to their reader.
At the end of the exercise, have them share their techniques with the class.
Have the students discuss which techniques they think work better.
BIO: Laurie
Wallmark writes picture books and middle-grades, poetry and prose, fiction and
nonfiction. She has an MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults from VCFA. When
not writing, Laurie teaches computer science at Raritan Valley Community
College, both to students on campus and in prison. Her debut picture book, Ada Byron Lovelace and the Thinking Machine,
received four starred trade reviews (Kirkus, Publishers Weekly, Booklist, and
School Library Journal) and several national awards, including Outstanding
Science Trade Book. Visit
http://www.lauriewallmark.com/
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